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Alicia's avatar

The eardrum part freaked me out!

McKenzie Rae's avatar

Right?! Any time someone talks about ruptured eardrums, I get goosebumps.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

That was awesome, McKenzie! 😁🖤🖤

McKenzie Rae's avatar

Thank you! 💜

Nicholas Samuel Stember's avatar

I have tinnitus as well, and it's certainly not fun. But what is fun is your writing :)

McKenzie Rae's avatar

Aw, thank you!

Daniel P. Douglas's avatar

I have tinnitus bad enough that I can't stand to be in a quiet room and need to turn the TV on as fast as possible for the background noise. So Aunt Hattie clawing at her eardrums? Yeah, I get it, Hattie. The ending lands. Nice work. 😊

McKenzie Rae's avatar

Oof, you have my sympathy.

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McKenzie Rae's avatar

Maybe the follow-up is the siblings/cousins finding a cursed piece of sheet music? Lol, I don’t know.